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SasuSaku love-love, chapter 1 by ~NejiFanGirl284:iconNejiFanGirl284:



Chapter 1:
An un-expected engagement.
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"Hey, guys!" The 16 year-old Sasuke Uchiha yelled as he ran up to his
older brother, Itachi Uchiha, and his brothers bestfriends
Kisame, Pein, Konan, Zetsu, Tobi, Deidara, Sasori, Hiden and Kakuzu exiting
they're apartment in which they lived together.
"Hello Sasuke." Itachi said with a slight smile.
"What's up lil' dude?" Kisame said, giving Sasuke a noogie.
"Uh...I need to tell all of you guys something really importent."
Sasuke said looking comical, with only the upper-part of his face showing.
"B-but, we where going to the mueseum, un!" Deidara said tearfully.
"I was going too show them what true art was, un!"
"Brat! You can't blow that art up!" Sasori said irritably. "It's the property of
the mueseum! And, besides. Art is supposed too be eternal!"
"Nuh-uh!" Deidara said, childishly.
"Art is supposed to be fleating! Art is a blast, un!"
"No, it's eternal!"
"Blast!"
"Eternal!"
"BLAST!"
"ETERNAL!
"Okay, break it up, break it up!" Konan said, waving her purse in-between them.
"We can hear what Sasuke has to say, THEN we can go to the mueseum."
Pein said sternly.
"Fine."
"Fine, un."
They walked inside the apartment and Itachi, Kisame, Pein and Konan sat down
on the couch, Kakuzu and Sasori sat on the arms of the couches,
Zetsu stood behind it, while Deidara, Hidan and Tobi sat on the floor.
Sasuke pulled up a chair from the kitchen and say infront of them.

*A few minutes pass*

"Well...What is it?" Kakuzu asked.
"Well....You see....I've....Uh....*Starts to blush*" Sasuke tried to talk but he
coulden't speak.
"Holy *BEEP*! Are my eyes diseveing me or is THE *BEEP*
Sasuke Uchiha ACTUALLY *BEEP* blushing!?" Hiden said trying
(Key word: Trying) not to cackle.
Itachi caught his gaze, and sent him a glare. Hiden shut up then.
But, Itachi was suprised to. Sasuke rarely ever turned red.
"Well....F-for the past year I-I've...." 'Why can't I tell them!?!'
"Yes?" Konan said soothingly
*Gulp* "I-I've been dateing someone" Sasuke blurted out, face turning
completely red.
"Really!?! That's awesome Sasuke!" Konan said with a huge smile.
"I'm so happy for you!"
"Well, there's more." Sasuke said, suddenly finding the carpet very interresting.
"......"
"Come on. Out with it." Sasori said impationtly.
"Well, uh....Yesterday I....Um...." Sasuke said looking anywhere but, his brother
and his friends.
"What? You what?" Kakuzu said raising an eyebrow.
"I asked her to marry me....And she said yes." He said, as if he couldn't
believe it himself.

"REALLY!?!" Deidara said, eyes wide.

"YOU'RE KIDDING!?!?!" Kisame shouted in dis-believef.
He had known this boy from the day he was born, and he was getting married
before him!?! Tipical.

"TOBI WILL BE A GOOD UNCLE!!!!" Tobi said, doing a happy-dance

"WELL, IT'S ABOUT *BEEP* TIME!" Hidan yelled, with a big smile on his face.

"OHHHH, I CAN'T WAIT!!!!! SOOOO MUCH TO PLAN!!!!!!!!!!!
Konan said, stars in her eyes.

Pein, Zetsu, Kakuzu and Sasori didn't say anything, just sat/standed there,
wide-eyed.

*Silence*

They all looked at Itachi, who's mouth was gaping open... And then what
happend next shocked everyone in the room

*Itachi runs and glomps Sasuke and starts twirling him around in sircles*
"REALLY!?!? SASUKE I'M SOOOO HAPPY FOR YOU!!!!!"

"Uhhh...Itachi are you okay?" Kisame said while wondering
if his friend needed to start going to a siciatrist.
"Y-yeah....Sorry....Carried away in the exitment...You know" Itachi said while
puting Sasuke down, clearly embaressed. His face was like this: -//////-
"Do you have a *BEEP* picture of her?" Hiden asked, curious.
"Yeah...Let me get it. It's in my wallet" He said. Sasuke handed them the picture.
They all stared in awe.
She was beautiful, but looked completely different from Sasuke.
She had short pink hair that came up to around the middle of her neck and it
was cut un-even. (you could tell she cut it herself) she had a farmer's tan
on her arms, but, it somehoe suited her. Her arms where
folded behind her head, which showed off her black t-shirt with the words in
hot-pink colors "Sk8ter girl" on it.
She had blue jeans on which where kinda torn-up and vans skater shoes.
But what they really noticed was her eyes.
They where a beautiful emerald green. "Well?" Sasuke said,
wondering what they thought."She's beautiful Sasuke" Itachi said handing the
picture back. "Ya picked good, un." Deidara said, smileing.
"So what's her name?" Kakuzu asked again.
"Her names...Sakura Haruno." He said.
"Nice name." Kisame commented.
"Fits her." Itachi added.
"So what is she *BEEP* like?" Hiden asked.
"Well...She likes to draw, paint, skate-board, surf, roller-blade,
she plays guitar and she's the lead singer in a band that her and her friends
made up, she acts in school plays, she dances hip-hop tango and other
dances I can't remember, she's really, strong, hot tempered, sarcastic, funny
and she's a HUGE klutz." Sasuke said while smileing to himself.
"Oh yeah, and she has a HUGE fore-head. Some people make fun of it,
but I think it's cute." he finished, blushing at the last part.
"She sounds...Uh...Unique." Kisame said truthfully.
"Would you like to meet her?" Sasuke said looking like a kid on Christmas.
"You bet we would!" Kisame said.
"Okay I'll call her" Sasuke said standing up pulling out his cell phone.

*He diels Sakura's number and you can hear her over
the phone when she anwsers*

"'Sup fool"
"Hey Sakura! I've told my brother Itachi and the rest of the guys about...Us..."
He said glanceing over at them, a bit of a blush grazing his cheeks.
"Sweet! I just told the girls about it" She said.
"Really? How did they react?" Sasuke asked.
"Ino huged me so much it knocked me down and it took me 10 minutes,
and a crow bar to pry her off of me." She said.
Sasuke could just see her rolling her eyes.
"When I told Tenten, she hugged me till' I couldn't breath,
Hinata looked happier then I've seen her in the longest time,
Temari was really too, and gave me a big bear hug." She finished.
"Good." he said, smileing at how happy she sounded.
Itachi cleared his throught so Sasuke would remember
WHY he called her in the first place.
"Oh yeah! I nearly forgot! My brother and his
friends want to meet you!" Sasuke told her exitedly.
"Cool! You can come to my place, we where going there anyway" she said.
"Why?" Sasuke asked with a puzzled look on his face.
"Band practice" She said.
"Oh yeah! Well see ya there!" He said.

*Hangs up phone*

"Let's GO!" Kisame said enthusyasticly.
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30 minutes later    
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"Whoa!" They all said (exept Sasuke and Itachi) as they gazed up at the
Haruno mansion.

"Now let's go meet my future wife!" Sasuke said.

They walked inside and a maid led them to a big room,
and there they saw Sakura and her friends.

"Alright girls which song are we gonna rehers first?" she asked the other girls.
"I dunno...Hey! What about 'Our song' by that you wrote about you and Sasuke?"
A girl with dirty blond hair in four pony tails said.
"Sounds good!" Sakura said.

A brown haired girl with her hair in odango sat down at the drums,
a girl with pure white eyes, no pupils, and dark blue hair picked up a bass,
the girl with the four pony-tails picked up a guitar,
a girl with a high pony tail and beach blond hair picked up a guitar,
Sakura picked up fiddle, and steped infront of a mic.

"I was raidin' shot gun in the front seat of his car.
He's got a one hand on the steering wheel,
the other on my, He~a~rt.
I look around turn the radio down, he says
'Babe, is somethin' wrong?'.
I say 'Nothin' I was just thinkin' how we
don't have a song'....
*All the girls sing* And he says.

*Chourus*
Our song is a slmmin', sreamin', doors.
Sneakin' out late, tappin' on you're window.
When we're on the phone,
and ya talk re~al slow, cause' it's late
and ya moma don't know.
Our song is the way you laugh.
The first 8 minutes I didn't kiss
when I should have.
And when I~ got home, for I said a-men,
askin' God if he, could, please, play it again.

I was walkin' up the porch steps after
everything that day.
It gone all wrong, I've been trampled on,
got lost, and thrown up.
We~ll, got to the hallway, well on my way,
two-mile up and back.
I almost didn't notice all the roses and
the note, that
*All the girls sing* Sa~id.

*Chourus*
Our song is a slmmin', sreamin', doors.
Sneakin' out late, tappin' on you're window.
When we're on the phone,
and ya talk re~al slow, cause' it's late and
ya moma don't know.
Our song is the way you laugh.
The first 8 minutes I didn't kiss
when I should have.
And when I~ got home, for I said a-men,
askin' God if he, could please play it again.

Duh-duh-duh-da~
I've he~ard every album, listen to the radio.
Wai~tin' for somethin' to come along.
That was good as our song.

*Chourus*
Cause' our song is a slammin', screams, doors.
Sneakin' out late, tappin' on
his, a, window.
When we're on the phone, and ya talk
real slow. Cause' it's late and
his moma don't know.
Our song is the way he laughs.
The first 8 minutes,
I didn't kiss him when I should have.
And when I~ got home. For I said a-men,
askin' God if he~ could please play it aga~in!
Play it aga~in! Oh, ye~ah.

I was raidin' shot gun, with my hair un-done
in the front seat of his car.
I grabed a pen, and an old napkin, and
I, wrote down our song~.

"You're getting better Sakura-chan!" Sasuke said, waving.
Sakura looked at where they where, and smiled.
"Sasuke-kun!"
She put down her fiddle, ran to them, and (literally) jumped in Sasuke's arms.
He twirlled her around a few times, before puting her back down.
"Sakura, this dude right here is my brother Itachi and they are Konan, Pein,
Kisame, Deidara, Sasori, Tobi, Zetsu, Kakuzu and Hidan.
Guys, this is my fiance' and you're future sister-in-law, Sakura Haruno."
©2008-2009 ~NejiFanGirl284
:iconnejifangirl284:

Author's Comments

I hope you guys liked it! I think I've gottin' better!
Now. Sakura, Sasuke, Ino, Hinata, Tenten Temari, Naruto etc, are all 16 in this, okay? And Itachi and the gang
are 18.
And Kisame, Deidara, Sasori, Konan, etc are all like brothers and sister to Sasuke and everyone else younger to them alrighty?
And thanks to Kamden who gave me a pointer on how to make my fan fics better! I swear, I'll get the second chapter out as soon as I can!
I just thought the non-edited version one was pretty crappy.
So, enjoy!

Naruto characters are Masashi Kishimoto's
and 'Our song' is by Taylor Swift.

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:icondeidaramylove1313:
awwwwwwwww that was KAWAIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!lol and kinda funny...:D

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:iconnejifangirl284:
Arigato! I apreatiate it:)
:icondeidaramylove1313:
welcome...:D

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:iconnejifangirl284:
Why are you confused?
:icondeidaramylove1313:
what was up with that last face...?

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