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Protector
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Stone wings come to life
we are creatures of the night
hunted guardians



My dream
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Bright blue petals shine
flower, a five-pointed star
Ruka is my name



Vacation
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Chicago wind blows
steaming hot chocolate warms
this boat ride is fun
©2008-2009 ~NejiFanGirl284
:iconnejifangirl284:

Author's Comments

Well, I was doing a lesson on Haiku, and I had to write some.
I hope I did okay. My mom and dad helped me alot with these.
I hope you like them:)

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:iconkdaanimefan:
hmm, interesting, you sure you counted syallables correctly?

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Be true with yourself
Its up to us to spread our wings
Motivation is how you start, habit is how you continue
There is more to relationships then the ecstasy of the flesh and body
Commit to a promise
:iconnejifangirl284:
I think so.
Why? Did you see some that weren't right?
:iconkdaanimefan:
yeah

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Be true with yourself
Its up to us to spread our wings
Motivation is how you start, habit is how you continue
There is more to relationships then the ecstasy of the flesh and body
Commit to a promise
:iconnejifangirl284:
Umm....What where they? If you don't mind telling me.
:iconkdaanimefan:
well stone and bright i feel certain have mutliple syallables

--
Be true with yourself
Its up to us to spread our wings
Motivation is how you start, habit is how you continue
There is more to relationships then the ecstasy of the flesh and body
Commit to a promise
:iconnejifangirl284:
Really? My Dad proof-read it, and he said it was fine :(
:iconkdaanimefan:
i could be wrong though

--
Be true with yourself
Its up to us to spread our wings
Motivation is how you start, habit is how you continue
There is more to relationships then the ecstasy of the flesh and body
Commit to a promise
:iconnejifangirl284:
Oh.
Well, I'll check it, just to make sure.
:iconkdaanimefan:
alright then ^^

--
Be true with yourself
Its up to us to spread our wings
Motivation is how you start, habit is how you continue
There is more to relationships then the ecstasy of the flesh and body
Commit to a promise

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